User blog comment:Adsper/All Possible Mobs/@comment-68.10.122.78-20170614132247/@comment-32070106-20170624075936

"Ain't" is not proper grammar.

Spell "Loneliness" this way.

End sentences with periods, but if you want to squish two sentences together, a semicolon works.

When using a contraction for it is, use an apostrophe. When using "its" as a possessive, remove the apostrophe.

"...lasted like half an hour," is not proper grammar. You should not use like before lengths of time. Kids these days and their trendy slang. Whatever happened to precision and clear speaking?

JK I'm 14 so I'm younger than all of you.