Board Thread:Off-Topic Discussion/@comment-26941921-20160517120317/@comment-27163598-20160914102247

I start climbing up to the top of the mountain to watch the sunset, the thing with the rift is that the sunset disappears almost as quickly as it appears. So he had to be there at the right moment so as not to miss it.

The higher he gets, the less he can breath, the less he can breath the slower he walks and as he walks, the diameter of the mountain gets smaller as he approaches the top. He notices that the sun is getting close, so he Harry's up to reach the top, not taking notice of the small bat cave on the mountain side, they become disterbed and fly out to rid the intruder. Carrot swings his antenna around and keeps them away. They start to fly away, Carrot lowers his guard, crunch!

He is bitten, right in the underbelly, in the one place an onic can get their teeth into. After it flys off, he turns around to catch the sun, he is to late. Darkness fills the horizon which fills the rest of the rift as well.he starts his journey down but slowly, to much movement around the wound will make it... Permanent.

Choon in next time to find out what happens next...