Board Thread:Off-Topic Discussion/@comment-27163598-20161024052544/@comment-27163598-20161113043240

I just noticed that for the past few days, all my posts have had more corrections then story, sorry if I'm bossy and all, but I am trying to just make sure everyone follows the rules, everyone breaks them, even me.

Rapto, is your account broken? what happened?

It's now night...

Pike has been watching the quaggas for a while now, he saw then get ambushed earlier by some coyotes species(extinct species of course) the quaggas fought them off using their hooves, a dangerous kick, so if pike is going to catch one, he needs to stick to the back and bite the neck, this was the tactic used by one of the four coyotes, but the others were uncoordinated and attacked everywhere. So it will still be a challenge, yay, a challenge. Pike waited for one to drink, but he also found out that they all drink in numbers at the same time so they are never alone. And they were very wary, so they became spooked at the smaller movements, so pike needed to be slow. Pike had an idea💡. He swam away from the quaggas, further to the left, finding a dryosaur, he grabs it and take it into the bush. The cover of darkness hides him, since he wouldn't be able to hide very well at day with his blue cyan skin. He may be built to run on land as well as he can swim, but he isn't a big cat, he can't be stealthy as well as one. So he gets as close at he feels safe, inbetween him and the water is a herd of quaggas. No one wants to get inbetween a hippo and the water, same with a crocadile. He throws the still alive unconscious dryosaur over the herd into the water, it wakes up from the splash and freaks out, all the quaggas become spooked and look at the dryosaur and back away from the waters edge. Pike makes a sprint for it, he runs right into the herd, past them all and targets the one closest to the water, as he runs past them, they start calling. (Now imagine this in slow mo) his target starts turning his head. Quaggas are running and jumping only after pike passes them, and in that moment, that quagga who saw only open jaws hit him in the face. (Now back to normal motion) they tumble into the water and pike performs a death roll.

Death fills the air, and the water. Pike looks back to shore. Only one quagga is still there, at the forest edge of the fire woods. He turns and joins his running herd.