Board Thread:Off-Topic Discussion/@comment-28009263-20170702193612/@comment-27163598-20171027092553

Now that the figure has left them. Achilles finds himself simply alone, watching as the informer shakes about helplessly as the knifefish stop his heart. The small figure floats to the surface, with barely any electrical running threw him as the eels have finished their goal, they start bitting on his thick skin, trying to make a meal of this dead critter.

Achilles turns around, and looks up into the endless sea the room was concealed in, the water shimmered with the limited light making its way through.

He hears an unusually loud splash, and when he turns to the pool. The informer is dragging himself from the waters edge, he rises above the electrical currents within the water, and as he stands his full height, steam flows from his skin, while a couple of eels remain stuck to his skin, holding on to get their meal. Achilles becomes somewhat angered by this, he dashes forth to attack, but stops immediately when he realises the informer is simply pointing a finger at him.

The informer is nowhere near as tall, but something about this feels awe fully threatening. Achilles just watches him for a moment, then attempts to slash the informer hand away. But with impact, he received an electric shock that painfully circuited his body. The informer then proceeded to grab Achilles by the legs and swing him into the pools, where it began to blaze with electricity.

The informer stood there and watched, as the eels electrical chains connected into a large web around the mighty suchomimus. His mind went back to his past, if he was the same man (male kapro) that he was when he was unscarred, he would have pulled the poor soul from the shocking pool.

"Whaa... GET EM" a small guard of baryonyx walked into the room. The informer didn't flinch, didn't retaliate, didn't even move as the baryonyx apprehended him. Using the chains they pulled Achilles out. The large Croclike dinosaur laid on the ground, in massive pain, puffing like mad. And when he regained his breath, he stood up, in massive pain, and starred him in the eye. "Takth him to Thhhe normal Cellth in the Jail"

I've rewritten this about 20 time.